writing planning

Purpose: Describe a moment in time 
Audience: A blind person 
L.G: Elaborate an a simple sentence to give a detailed representation of what you see
S.O.S: 
-A minimum of 5 adjective for each elaboration 
-A minimum of 5 adverbs for each elaboration
-At least 2 similies and/or metophores in each elaboration
-Elaboration must be a minmum of a 6 sentence paragraph.

Part three
The flashes of light struck the earoplane and it seemed to blow up the engine.
As the earoplane is in the sky there would be people in there. 
They would feel nervous, angry, hungry, bored, annoyed with the noises. I could just emagen the sounds they could hear. The lighting might sound like a rock. They are very scared. I would be scared like a spider inside the plane would be scared. On the plane i would be scared. On the plane i saw flashes. Beside the plane was flashes. The plane hit at the engen.

BY TAMARA TURNER RM 1