Thursday, May 12, 2016

Informative writing- Explains something
Purpose: Infor your audience about about an event in New Zealand
Audience: A person from another country.
L.G use sub titles to labour your paragraphs
S.O.S
-have three clearly labeled paragraphs
-use rhetorical questions to engage
-enclude examples
-Intro, P1, P2, P3, con

Intro: Hello i’m here today to talk to you about my siblings. My siblings are really crazy

P1 How many siblings I have?
Hi in my family i have 5 sisters and 2 brothers they are very crazy. On my mums side i only have 3 sisters and 2 brothers on my dads side i have 2 sisters.

P2 Who my siblings are?  On my mums side i have Talicha Channae and Kadina they are my sisters. My brothers are Che and Jared. Jared is related to Mrs F because Riched is my brothers dad. O my dads side i have Maddy and Bonnie. Bonnie came to this school.

P3 How old they are?
Ok Talicha is eighteen Channae is sixteen Kadina is fourteen Bonnie is thirteen  and Maddy is 2 and i am thirteen Che is twentyfour or twenty three and Jared is twenty.

Con Fact 1: My siblings are very crazy you dont wont to meat them. Well they are nice but they are very very crazy two of my sisters live with my mum. Bonnie lives with her mum same with maddy. Talicha and i live with our dads.

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