Stratford Summer heat
Walking on the hot black tar in jandles.
I’m holding a ice cream in my hand the ice cream the ice cream melts in my hand.
I walk on the burning hot sand.
Swimming at the beach on a hot sunny day.
Getting burnt going fish.
Blue sky all around.
Drinking a very cold drink.
Dogs are panting people dehydrated.
you use similes well. use also use metaphors. next step is to add a learning goal
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